Long Walk « Thread Started on Nov 18, 2006, 11:19am »
Zurth walked slowly into the woodland. Zurth visited the woodland to help him train, for Zurth had joined the army of elves to help him with his quest. Zurth walked though the woodland looking for something good to shoot at. Although a forest wouldn't be smart to train with fire arrows.
Zurth pulled the arrow back and woosh - the arrow went flying up in the air. Zurth didn't light the arrow to see where it might land. Zurth found his arrow and picked it up. Zurth found a nice big rock. Zurth placed a rug over the rock. Zurth started his fire arrow. Woosh! the arrow flew at the rug. Zurth quickly pulled out another arrow and shot it at the rug. Woosh! Zurth grabbed another and shot it. Zurth made a fire and camped out in the wild.
Aeronwen edit: I have put this post into the past tense. Zurth, please read the rules on posting requirements; all posts need to be conducted in the past tense, and a line needs to be left between paragrpahs. I am also going to ask that you try to improve the quality of your posts, as we are an intermediate RPG - try to work on varying setnance lengths, and adding in some more detailed descriptions Just to warn you, next time a post is not written correctly, I will not correct it for you, I will just delete the post.
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Just to warn you, next time a post is not written correctly, I will not correct it for you, I will just delete the post.
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